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    I just finished up the major part of my new, updated website.
    I'm hoping to get any constructive help - like checking for typos, pics that don't load, etc.

    Website is: www.sunshineportraits.com

    Thanks for your help!

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    It all looks great, nice and fast for me, no upload issues and no typos that I can see.

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    • #3
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      Thanks AJ.
      Any critque on photos that shouldn't be included?
      I get emtionally vested and its hard to cut through all the photos and find the gems.

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        Originally posted by Barbara View Post
        Thanks AJ.
        Any critque on photos that shouldn't be included?
        I get emtionally vested and its hard to cut through all the photos and find the gems.
        I'm not an expert in this line of photography, but there wasn't any shots that stuck out at me as being not right, all looks great. Its not to busy, its well organized, easy to navigate. No issues here.

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          Looks great and all the photos are good.

          I'm no Grammar expert but this passage looks off to me. (Even though we all know "Bestest" isn't a true word.
          Baby Dogs
          Little bitty baby dogs! Some with their littermates, some just out for their first dog show. We love puppies bestest!
          Should it read "We love puppies The bestest"?
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            I believe to be grammatically correct it would read "we love puppies best". Therefore the passage as written is most correct.

            1. Brown puppies are best.
            2. That brown puppy is the best.

            From what I can remember it comes down to whether or not the subject is plural.
            Throw a little light. If it doesn't come back, it probably fell off...
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              Correct But,

              They are using the word :Bestest: as to be comical or cute so the whole passage has to be taken in a comical sense but still be somewhat correct.....

              "I love Green Jolly Ranchers, They are the bestest!" Not "I love Green jolly Ranchers, They are Bestest!"
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                Hi Barbara,
                There are a few grammatical errors, but nothing glaring that really need to be addressed.
                There is a spelling error, however, in the portfolio section. Under Little Dogs, the word attitude is misspelled. Should have 2 T's after the A instead of one.

                PS: I like the use of "bestest". It's cute.
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                • #9
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                  Thanks everyone for your input. I didn't mean to start grammer wars!
                  But I have decided to leave it as "I love puppies bestest."

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                  • #10
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                    That totally works! It does seem to make a difference using it in a singular way.
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                      Hey that website is great! The interface is very easy to use. Nice work!
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                      • #12
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                        The website is very nice, easy to use. Basically what AJ said.

                        And ahh John, Nick. I don't think that little line was meant to be grammatically correct. I think it was just meant to be kind of cutsie type think, or at least that my story and I are stickin to it.

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                          Thats what I tried tellin him, what do we know though, we're just poor white kids livin la vida loca :-)
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